Monday, June 18, 2018

WALT Choose Words to Make Our Writing More Interesting


The Moon is like a grey biscuit because it is round like a ball.
The Sun is like a round orange because it is round like a coin.
Indie
Writing Reflection
I like to write about similes.
I am so proud when I achieve my goal.

The next step for me is to use more similes in my stories.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Wow you used two similes to describe both the sun and the moon. Well done Indie.